"I liked it when...next time...

Hello, my fellow bloggers. I had already commented on my top three favorite entry's of assignment #3. I would just like to say Zaryab, AmitJ, and Helena you guys are doing a really good job with your blogs and entry's.


Zaryab...
I like the way you express your opinion in assignment #3. You used positive and logical words to make the readers believe in what you were saying. I like the fact that you specified your entry. The only advice I would give you would be, try not to make your paragraphs too big, because sometimes it makes it boring for the readers. Everything else was perfect!
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AmitJ...
I believe you used your entry very well to voice your opinion in assignment #3. I like how you organized your thoughts in your entry. That was very well done. The only advice I would give you would be, try to be more specific on some of the subjects you mentioned. The rest of your entry was put out really well!
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Helena...
Your blog is excellent! You used so much of your own opinion in your assignment #3 entry, that I couldn't stop reading it. You definetly know what it takes to catch the readers eyes. I like how the entry had many subjects, from racism to technology. The only advice I would give you would be, when you are writing your paragraphs, sometimes the sentences are long, make sure you use commas so that the readers are able to take a breath. Keep up the great work!
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